Friday, February 26, 2010

"corners of your caste"

an old abandoned shack you're in,
the corners of your caste...
I've come to you to look again,
at all you thought had passed.....
it hurts when we find shadowed rooms,
with things so well we hide...
we are reborn by facing this,
in truth love has no pride....
you may believe a dream's just dream,
a mental fantasy....
for you can turn them on or off,
some not so easily...
yet dreams are all the imagery,
of how we really feel...
they leave aside our reasoning,
and show us what is real...

and the lover's sleeping in your heart
cuz' all your love's so strained
and you never learn to let it roll
still stumbling in this old game

the shack is how you see your heart,
and shadows fill its rooms...
the child inside still so afraid,
it may never leave the tomb...
when it cannot stop the nightmares,
that were written for the play...
it will value all its failures,
and re-live them every day...
caution is your blocking now,
and you won't let me in....
but that ain't the way our love began,
trust me throw it to the wind....
for when the wolf shows up knocking,
he knows what you must do...
and I gave my all my everything,
so the rest is up to you.....

7 comments:

Rafael said...

lovely poem!

cinner said...

This is beautiful. it can really apply to anyone, I enjoyed your last post to. simplifying would be wonderful. take care for now, have a good weekend.

spottedwolf said...

Thankz you guys....same to you & yers Cin.....and you are right. Truth is...all the songs are universal in application.


Nice to hear yer words again Raphael....say hi to yer Mom for me.

Isha Ethera said...

Interesting.
I likee it.
:)

Lovelyness.

Tammie Lee said...

A very wise and common story
if only we were taught to be brave and love
the good news is that the seed, the ability to love is planted in each heart
wonderful poem spottedwolf

Marcia M said...

Beautiful and well written.

spottedwolf said...

Thankyou Ladies....
and welcome Marcia...to my little den.

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